Ruth! The orange with the knife reads very well. Nice work. The one with the orange parts or flower petals isn't so clear, however we can still see the orange in it. The third one loses its orange visual identity. I'm not sure what it is supposed to represent. However, congrats of the first one. One suggestion to boost the "power" of these communicative devices. They have even more impact when you combine more unrelated shapes to generate new meaning (whereas cutting an orange is common meaning). Good work, especially for the 1st one!
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Ruth! The orange with the knife reads very well. Nice work. The one with the orange parts or flower petals isn't so clear, however we can still see the orange in it. The third one loses its orange visual identity. I'm not sure what it is supposed to represent. However, congrats of the first one. One suggestion to boost the "power" of these communicative devices. They have even more impact when you combine more unrelated shapes to generate new meaning (whereas cutting an orange is common meaning). Good work, especially for the 1st one!
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